adjustment on the project idea 3

I have written about Manual Training Program for Volunteers in Alhajj season. But I changed my project direction a little different. See the attached.

my new project idea:

I see the volunteers with the Red Cresent during Alhajj season are messy and not organized, and most of them do not have enough information about the emergency situations, so I want to suggest to the Red Crescent of Saudi Arabia to open a department for volunteers ,so anyone wants to volunteer during Alhajj season can apply to this department and get training to be eligible to work with a Red Crescent during Alhajj.

So, I just want you to adjust on what I have written to meet my new project idea