revision my essay

link;https://www.ted.com/talks/carol_dweck_the_power_of…

  • The essay is a 3-4 MLA-formatted essay that includes a focused main claim, related subclaims, a counterargument/rebuttal, evidence, and logical reasoning.
  • The essay includes at least two of our sources (Dweck, Hattie from DeWitt’s blog, Hilton) in the essay and uses at least one piece of evidence in every body paragraph. The body paragraph evidence can come from our sources, from your research, or from your experience.
  • The essay includes at least three citations in the essay, using proper MLA format
  • Quotations, paragraphs, and summaries are properly embedded with signal phrases, in-text citations, and explanations.
  • Accurate MLA In-text citations
  • No Works Cited page is required.