timely writer

You are moving in the right direction although improvements are needed. Your main content does demonstrates very good understanding; did not address all details in full. Missing some minor aspects. There is no attention getter. How will you get the attention of the audience to get them to listen? This needs to be the first thing that happens and in the first intro slide it didn’t quite do this. Your conclusion demonstrates very good understanding; did not address all details in full. Missing some minor aspects. 12/15 You demonstrate very good understanding; did not address all details in full. Missing some minor aspects.  You will also need to add images to your presentation so that it’s not just text on every slide. 7/10 You demonstrate a clear understanding of the document organization that included the APA title page, table of contents, and section headings. 5/5 Also I commented previously about the ‘demanding’ tolerance and the negative connotation that it has. It still does and is there a better that would be softer instead of just the forcing of leaders? You may find that leaders don’t need to be forceful or demanding because people just follow them. By changing out that word the tone will change and will have a more positive impact. Just a thought!

 

 

  1. Title slide-Include your name, and title of the presentation- notes not needed for this slide
  2. Introduction slide- Introduce your presentation (50-75 words for notes)
    • Include your opener
    • Include your thesis
  3. A slide for your first main point-Include supporting points (50-75 words for notes)
  4. A slide for your second main point- Include supporting points (50-75 words for notes)
  5. A slide for your third main point- Include supporting points (50-75 words for notes)
  6. (Optional) A slide for your fourth main point- Include supporting points (50-75 words for notes)
  7. (Optional) A slide for your fifth main point- Include supporting points (50-75 words for notes)
  8. Conclusion slide- Restates the thesis, summarize key points of the presentation, and be sure to leave your audience with a final thought (50-75 words for notes)
  9. Reference slide-Include sources used for your presentation in APA format-notes not needed for this slide