topic music its about song analysis finalize it and it has two pages left 1

1.please check the instruction first(4 pages totally i finished 2) not a native speaker so please try not to use professional words

3.please edit this essay by checking each comment made by blue color(this is important)

4.the song i chosen is “” orange sky by Alexi Murdoch

5. i’ve already finish half of it please organize and finalize it.

thanks for helping me out